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标题: [讨论]第二十二场乡试总评与交流 [打印本页]

作者: 城市獵人    时间: 2005-6-2 10:37
标题: [讨论]第二十二场乡试总评与交流
本帖最后由 墨缘真人 于 2016-6-17 10:04 编辑 <br /><br /><P>(一)</P>
<P>各试题配分</P>
<P>第一題配分:
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<P>立意<FONT face="Times New Roman">(7</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> :
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<P>对仗<FONT face="Times New Roman">(5</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> :
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<P>声律<FONT face="Times New Roman">(5</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> : 合律
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<P>机巧<FONT face="Times New Roman">(3</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> : <FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>河<FONT face="Times New Roman">/</FONT>风潮<FONT face="Times New Roman">/</FONT>海互扣<FONT face="Times New Roman">1, </FONT>有隐喻<FONT face="Times New Roman">2)
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<P>总分 :
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<P>第二題配分:
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<P>立意<FONT face="Times New Roman">(7</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> :
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<P>对仗<FONT face="Times New Roman">(5</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> : 业/河, 风潮/学子, 宽, 整体工稳
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<P>声律<FONT face="Times New Roman">(5</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> : 合律
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<P>机巧<FONT face="Times New Roman">(3</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> : <FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>柳扣娥眉<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>有隐喻<FONT face="Times New Roman">)
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<P>总分 :
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<P>第三題配分:
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<P>立意<FONT face="Times New Roman">(15</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> :
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<P>对仗<FONT face="Times New Roman">(5</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> :
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<P>声律<FONT face="Times New Roman">(5</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> : 合律
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<P>总分 :
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<P>第四題配分:
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<P>立意<FONT face="Times New Roman">(15</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> :
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<P>对仗<FONT face="Times New Roman">(5</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> :
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<P>声律<FONT face="Times New Roman">(5</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT> : 合律
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<P>总分 :
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<P>第五題配分:
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<P>(由於时间匆促, 只能约略评分, 在此先说声抱歉)</P>
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作者: 城市獵人    时间: 2005-6-2 10:42
本帖最后由 墨缘真人 于 2016-6-17 10:04 编辑 <br /><br /><P ><p></p></P>
<P ><B>总评</B><FONT face="Times New Roman"><B>:</B><B><p></p></B></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><B>题目简析</B><FONT face="Times New Roman">:<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P >(一) 出句<FONT face="Times New Roman">: </FONT>信口开河<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>引动风潮奔向海<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>水部<FONT face="Times New Roman">] (20</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><B><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></B></P>
<P ><B>题旨与要求</B><FONT face="Times New Roman">:<p></p></FONT></P>
<P >出句是针对水部所写<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>猎人认为<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>一个话题要能够引动风潮<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>最后众水聚集成海<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>方为上上水帖<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>故作此句<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>尤其<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>出句的信口开河<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>风潮<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>海<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>紧紧扣注水部的特质<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >对句必须尽量紧扣联都某个部门<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>如试部礼部等等<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也可写水部<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也可以写某<FONT face="Times New Roman"> ”</FONT>帮派<FONT face="Times New Roman">”. </FONT>或其它个别专栏<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>但请不要对<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>联都<FONT face="Times New Roman">”.<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><B>浅析</B><FONT face="Times New Roman"><B>:</B><B> <p></p></B></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">(1)<p></p></FONT></P>
<P >这一题采取限制条件的方式对句<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>一般的对句<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>是依照<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>对仗<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>意谐<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>的原则来应对<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>这里猎人所谓所谓的意谐<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>一种是按照字面意象或寓意<FONT face="Times New Roman"> (</FONT>这一种<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>我们常用的临屏对句<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>因为没有环境让你当机应对<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>因此只能用常理来判断是否契合<FONT face="Times New Roman">), </FONT>还有一种是随机应对<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>那就得看酬对双方所处的环境<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>背景<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>如同大家听过的一些对句的精采故事<p></p></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >但这里的对句方式<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>除了采用一般临屏对句的方式外<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>另外针对再限制条件<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也就是先将出句赋于某种特殊意义<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>再规定对句也要合乎某种特殊的意义<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>在这里<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>若把两句并起来有点像分咏<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>这种<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>文字游戏<FONT face="Times New Roman">” , </FONT>猎人认为在技术层面上<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>并不离对联格律的范畴<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就如诗钟一样<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>以此可以测验各位对联的技术是否纯熟<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>而且<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也真得很有趣<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>因此就拿来考各位<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >在目前网络楹联界来说<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>恕猎人识浅<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>猎人没看过有人这样出题的<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>传统对句也没看过有这种方法<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>在联都实属创举<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>往后<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>是不是为传统楹联界所能接受<FONT face="Times New Roman">?? </FONT>猎人暂时不愿想这么多<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>任何一种新方式的出现<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>往往都会与传统力量有所磨擦<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>这是常态<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>一般联友也就不必去探讨这么多<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>那是学者的事<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>只要无伤大雅<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>我们玩得愉快就好<p></p></P>
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<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">(2)<p></p></FONT></P>
<P >这一句从<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>开河<FONT face="Times New Roman">” “</FONT>风潮<FONT face="Times New Roman">”, </FONT>一直到海<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>都是跟<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>水部<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>紧密配合<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>信口开河<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就是水部最重要的特质<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>经过大家<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>信口开河<FONT face="Times New Roman">”, </FONT>滔滔不绝地灌水<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>引起热烈讨论<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>最后形成一种的风潮<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>会聚成<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>海<FONT face="Times New Roman">”, </FONT>此句把<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>双关<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>的特性充份活用<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>并且让人读起来通俗易懂<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>也饶富趣味<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >对句欲得到高分<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>在联意上<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>除了贴切所咏的标的为第一要件之外<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>最好能如出句一样生动<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>在技术上<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>河<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>风潮<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>海的<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>内对<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>与紧密的联系<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也是值得注意的<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>当然<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>上联澎湃的气势<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>下联也要尽量能媲美匹敌为佳<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><B>阅后简评</B><FONT face="Times New Roman"><B>:</B><B><p></p></B></FONT></P>
<P >大部份的卷子<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>都以直白应对<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>虽然写得贴切<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>但是<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>像出句写的这样<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>形象化<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>的联不多<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>因此在对仗上<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就显得隔一层纱<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>甚至一层山<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>有点各说各话<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>各位可以看分咏<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>不仅工整<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>两句的意境也是尽量密合<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >猎人以<FONT face="Times New Roman"> ”</FONT>山里云儿<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>与<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>心随观音§的作品为例<FONT face="Times New Roman">:<p></p></FONT></P>
<P >出句:信口开河,引动风潮奔向海<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>水部<FONT face="Times New Roman">]<p></p></FONT></P>
<P >对句:截流固坝,搬来玉石筑成堤<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>水部<FONT face="Times New Roman">]<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P >出句:信口开河,引动风潮奔向海;<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>水部<FONT face="Times New Roman">] <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >对句:呕心沥血,送迎桃李踏成蹊。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>学部<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT>(今音)<FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >这两联不但字面上意境能尽量相合<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>而且也能把贴切的表达其主题<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>尤以第一例为佳<p></p></P>
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<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"></FONT> </P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"></FONT> </P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> (</FONT>二<FONT face="Times New Roman">) </FONT>出句<FONT face="Times New Roman">: </FONT>岸柳迎舟<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>淡扫蛾眉千万笔<FONT face="Times New Roman"> (20</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT><BR ><BR ></P><p></p>
<P >诗云<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>却嫌脂粉污颜色,淡扫蛾眉朝至尊。<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>柳的清秀宜人<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>不似花争奇斗艳<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>强烈吸引大众的目光<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>在猎人的笔下<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>柳却成了喜欢<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>画淡妆<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>的美人<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>这跟以往猎人常见的咏柳有些不同<FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>如烟<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>如发<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>如丝<FONT face="Times New Roman">…..). </FONT>不仅如此<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>言下之意<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>好象是为了<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>迎舟<FONT face="Times New Roman">” , </FONT>却把自己的眉毛画了千笔万笔<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也隐约透露女子为了见心仪的男子<FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>或郎君<FONT face="Times New Roman">), </FONT>所表现的出来的慎重与紧张<p></p></P>
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<P >蛾眉扣柳<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>对<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>蛾眉<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>的词<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>最好也能扣柳所对的字<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P >至于有考生质疑画千万笔怎能说是淡扫<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>我已在交流帖中说明了<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就不再赘述<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P >成联<FONT face="Times New Roman">: </FONT>夜樱<FONT face="Times New Roman"> (25</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)<BR ><BR ><p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><B>题目说明</B><B><FONT face="Times New Roman">: <p></p></FONT></B></P>
<P >所谓夜樱,其实是打上灯光的樱花<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>在日本蔚为风潮<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>台湾也有<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>其特色与白昼截然不同<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>别有一番风味<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><B>简析</B><FONT face="Times New Roman"><B>:</B><B><p></p></B></FONT></P>
<P >猎人把这一题让各位考生充份去发挥<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>各位除了可采用参考资料之外<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也可以自己去找<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也可以自己去掌握特色加以阐述<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>使题材面更宽更广<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P >在某个网页上对夜樱也这样的描述<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>有别于白昼的纯洁可人,夜晚的樱花呈现妖娆神秘,周边甚至流泻一股幽玄气氛。<FONT face="Times New Roman">”. </FONT>猎人颇有同感<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>如果把樱花给拟人化<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>我想<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>她将是一个有<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>致命吸引力<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>的女人<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><B>阅后简评</B><FONT face="Times New Roman"><B>:</B><B><p></p></B></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">"</FONT>赏夜樱<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>虽起源于日本<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>但与中国的赏花文化<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>并无排斥<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>因此很好切入<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>不过<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>由于大陆并不流行<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>因此<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>能达到景趣双兼大概不多<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P >很多人因为犯题而沒有分数<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>实在很可惜<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>但题目有特別标明<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>獵人也爱莫能助<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT></P>


                               
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作者: 城市獵人    时间: 2005-6-2 10:43
本帖最后由 墨缘真人 于 2016-6-17 10:04 编辑 <br /><br /><P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>四<FONT face="Times New Roman">)  </FONT>主题<FONT face="Times New Roman">: </FONT>灯<FONT face="Times New Roman"> (25</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT><BR ><BR ><p></p></P>
<P ><B>要求:</B><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">(1)</FONT>限每边<FONT face="Times New Roman">5</FONT>字到<FONT face="Times New Roman">20</FONT>字,无废字。
<FONT face="Times New Roman">(2)</FONT>以灯为出发点<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>可以写景<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也可以叙事<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>情感<FONT face="Times New Roman">….</FONT>各种不同角度<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>任君挑选<FONT face="Times New Roman">.</FONT><BR ><BR ><p></p></P>
<P ><B>简析</B><FONT face="Times New Roman"><B>:</B><B><p></p></B></FONT></P>
<P >这个题目<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>可以说是作文题目的常客了<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>这个很好发挥的题目<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>说句幽默的话<FONT face="Times New Roman">: </FONT>猎人若再多说<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就有辱考生的智慧了<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><B>阅后简评</B><FONT face="Times New Roman"><B>:</B><B><p></p></B></FONT></P>
<P >一般来说<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>有<FONT face="Times New Roman"> ”</FONT>主题<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>的咏联<FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>不论是合咏分咏<FONT face="Times New Roman">), </FONT>是绝不能把题字入联的<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>若题目是夜樱<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>那<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>夜樱<FONT face="Times New Roman">”, </FONT>两字是一定不能入联的<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>而且猎人还特别说明<FONT face="Times New Roman">: </FONT>犯题不予计分<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>而且<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>在这里<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>不知者不能说是无罪的<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>猎人已设交流帖<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>不懂还是可以问的<FONT face="Times New Roman">.. (</FONT>不过<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>猎人只抓<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>樱<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>字有入联的<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>只有<FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>夜<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>字入联<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>并无苛求<FONT face="Times New Roman">)<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >第四题的<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>灯<FONT face="Times New Roman">”, </FONT>由于猎人有说一句<FONT face="Times New Roman">:  “</FONT>大家可以从<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>灯<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>为出发点<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>任意发挥<FONT face="Times New Roman">”, </FONT>因此就不限各位是否把<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>灯<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>字<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>写入联中<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>虽然这样说<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>但是<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也不能把灯当成小配角<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>甚至只是点缀<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>这样也不好<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>不过<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>各位以后要记住<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>如果只写题目<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>无特别说明<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>作联仍须尽量避题字<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >这一次不少人就因为这样扣分<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>真的很可惜<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>但既然规定已经说出口<FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>没说还可考虑酌情给分<FONT face="Times New Roman">), </FONT>那就一定要执行<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>否则对其他用心遵守的人就不公平了<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>五<FONT face="Times New Roman">). </FONT>急智应对<FONT face="Times New Roman"> (10</FONT>分<FONT face="Times New Roman">)<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><B>题目说明</B><B><FONT face="Times New Roman">:</FONT></B><B>
</B>一日<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>猎人辞官归隐<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>漫步莲苑<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>入口处设接待所<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>入室欲参访拜山<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>然鸦雀无声<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>良久<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>猎人愀然<FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>脸色凝重<FONT face="Times New Roman">), </FONT>于墙上留一句:谁接清风洗我尘<FONT face="Times New Roman">? </FONT>空山一拜<FONT face="Times New Roman"> (</FONT>古韵<FONT face="Times New Roman">).<BR ><BR ><p></p></FONT></P>
<P >时大掌柜潇湘妃子有事出远门<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>晚归<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>见状<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>乍觉怠慢<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>欲书对句回应<FONT face="Times New Roman">,
</FONT>请问<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>若大掌柜是您<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>您会怎样对<FONT face="Times New Roman">. <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >注<FONT face="Times New Roman">: <p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">(1. </FONT>酬句能顾及待客之道最佳<FONT face="Times New Roman">).<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman">(2. </FONT>可以自行假设合理的<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>道具<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>或<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>场景<FONT face="Times New Roman">”, </FONT>借景物来应对<FONT face="Times New Roman">), </FONT>但基本上<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>莲苑<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>接待所等景物不变<FONT face="Times New Roman">)<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><B>简析</B><B><FONT face="Times New Roman">:<p></p></FONT></B></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >设宴接待远道而来的亲友或客人<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>叫<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>“接风”<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>或<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>“洗尘”<FONT face="Times New Roman">,  </FONT>猎人是把这两个词串在一起用<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>整句的意思就是<FONT face="Times New Roman">: "</FONT>谁来接猎人这位<FONT face="Times New Roman">[</FONT>清风<FONT face="Times New Roman">], </FONT>为猎人洗尘<FONT face="Times New Roman">??" </FONT>的意思<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >曾有人质疑是否为<FONT face="Times New Roman"> ‘</FONT>借<FONT face="Times New Roman">’ </FONT>之误<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>在猎人的原意<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>用<FONT face="Times New Roman"> ‘</FONT>接<FONT face="Times New Roman">’ </FONT>是没错的<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>猎人也曾把这位考生的<FONT face="Times New Roman"> ‘</FONT>借<FONT face="Times New Roman">’ </FONT>列入考虑<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>两相比较的结果<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>猎人认为<FONT face="Times New Roman"> ‘</FONT>借<FONT face="Times New Roman">’ </FONT>字略胜一筹<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>两边的意境各有胜场<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>用<FONT face="Times New Roman"> ‘</FONT>借<FONT face="Times New Roman">’ </FONT>的话<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>整句的感觉是比较谦虚一点<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>也比较脱俗<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>但当时猎人有点不耐烦<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>刻意自抬身价<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>表达不满<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>自是意料之中<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>因此更须要考生运用智能来巧妙化解<FONT face="Times New Roman">. (</FONT>猎人借此机会感谢这位联友建议<FONT face="Times New Roman">, ‘</FONT>借<FONT face="Times New Roman">’ </FONT>确实较佳<FONT face="Times New Roman">)<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P >这里的<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>接清风<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>跟<FONT face="Times New Roman"> “</FONT>洗尘<FONT face="Times New Roman">” </FONT>两词的关系是并列<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>是比较合理<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>然而会有点混淆<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>让人认为是以<FONT face="Times New Roman">(</FONT>借<FONT face="Times New Roman">)</FONT>风洗尘<FONT face="Times New Roman">. </FONT>这部分会酌情处理<FONT face="Times New Roman">.<p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><FONT face="Times New Roman"> <p></p></FONT></P>
<P ><B>阅后简评</B><FONT face="Times New Roman"><B>:</B><B><p></p></B></FONT></P>
<P >这一题要词喻双兼, 上下工整, 实在不容易, 出现不少人直白应对, 是意料中事. 因此, 对得不好也不必气馁. 真的辛苦大家了.<p></p></P>
<P > <p></p></P>
<P >如果猎人有机会再出类似题目, 除了尽量考虑考生可取用的题材更多元化之外, 也会改进一些可能较不自然或欠妥的部份. 让考生更能发挥.<p></p></P>
<P > <p></p></P>
<P >大多数的人, 都是直白对句, 按理没办法给太高.<p></p></P>


                               
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