<P align=left mso-layout-grid-align: left; TEXT-ALIGN: mso-line-height-alt: 12.0pt? 0cm; 5pt none;><FONT size=3>学联笔记1</FONT>
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<P align=left mso-layout-grid-align: left; TEXT-ALIGN: mso-line-height-alt: 12.0pt? 0cm; 5pt none;><FONT size=3>读月明如昼,江流有声</FONT></P>
<P align=left mso-layout-grid-align: left; TEXT-ALIGN: mso-line-height-alt: 12.0pt? 0cm; 5pt none;><FONT size=3>1)惊叹于联家的笔墨老道,写流水的声音,浑不是似我等,先搜肠刮肚地找词以期描摹出流水的声音,而是不事渲染,直接用有声两个字,让读联人自已去想象这种声音,这就是有一千个读者就将会有一千种不同的流水声音,试想不是高人如何能达此一等境界。2)月明对江流,如昼与有声对起来,也是叹为观止,意味无穷,言传不尽。3)关于<FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>如<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>字,若依我,必用<FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>似,若<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>与之相对,而此间<FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>如昼<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>,和<FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>江澄万顷净如练;峰峙一拳高入云。<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>中的<FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>如练<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>,与<FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>如<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>相对的分别是动词<FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>有<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>和<FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>入<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>。前人如此一对,却是豁然开朗,境地大宽。</FONT></P>
<P align=left mso-layout-grid-align: left; TEXT-ALIGN: mso-line-height-alt: 12.0pt? 0cm; 5pt none;><FONT color=#2222dd size=3>云卷:关于对仗的思考有见地,读书了也思考了:))</FONT></P>
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