(已覆) 英译望海绝句

通八洲

参照望海诗意来多首洋文杂烩，可惜联都断网失去望海原诗，我只保留跟贴的英译本，冀望海把原诗再贴
Born in the season just before winter.
Swadled in a famine year was hot and hunger.
Sweatier resulted in rashes all over.
Fresh cool air was better than a doctor.


七绝【命在牛奶也】望海
Starvation was the life in a famine year,
Being swaddled couldn’t work out fear.
Malnutrition made my limbs as thin as stalk，
The cow gave me milk I wonna to talk。

七绝【夏末童趣多】望海
Early fall was my childish dream,
The place I liked best was the stream.
It’s lucky there was no pollution that day,
Frogs and loaches were eatable by the way.

七绝【人心向善忆也甜】望海
Living on the outskirts was purer and franker,
Relatives and neighbors never gave a cold shoulder.
Sharing was their good manner,
Poems were good for remember.

通八洲

望海 发表于 2019-1-29 12:31
我有些作品保留在旧手机上了。回头看看能否挖出来

挖出来

通八洲

步韵七绝【梦游】望海
昨夜孤斟梦向东，
吟鞭醉举驾遗风。
家山古道依然在，
却是无人识老翁。

赏读。我也依题来一首，不说梦，却是梦

集句【梦游】
茫茫霭霭失西东，《赵嘏-唐》
飘忽浮生疾似风。《刘兼-唐》
将取离魂随白骑，《杜牧-唐》
十洲三岛逐仙翁。《李有中-唐》