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浅壑深沟,瑞雪纷飞平坎坷
红花绿草,春风劲舞灿芳菲 ------------洪都小子惠赐 |
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浅壑深沟,瑞雪纷飞平坎坷
红花绿草,春风劲舞灿芳菲 ------------洪都小子惠赐 |
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谢谢朋友好对,工整
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言之有理!奉茶~
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浅壑深沟,瑞雪纷飞平坎坷
红花绿草,春风劲舞灿芳菲 ------------洪都小子惠赐 |
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