这道会试出题合律吗？请老师解惑！

小手冰冰凉

<P>第十二场会试的第一题出句是：</P>
<P><FONT color=#0000ff><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=淡" target="_blank" >淡</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=泊" target="_blank" >泊</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=之" target="_blank" >之</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=心" target="_blank" >心</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=" target="_blank" > </A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=不" target="_blank" >不</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=滞" target="_blank" >滞</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=于" target="_blank" >于</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=山" target="_blank" >山</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=水" target="_blank" >水</A>
</FONT><FONT color=#000000> </FONT></P>
<P>若按古音，平仄为：</P>
<P><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=淡" target="_blank" >淡</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=泊" target="_blank" >泊</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=之" target="_blank" >之</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=心" target="_blank" >心</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=" target="_blank" > </A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=不" target="_blank" >不</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=滞" target="_blank" >滞</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=于" target="_blank" >于</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=山" target="_blank" >山</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=水" target="_blank" >水</A>
仄仄平平 平仄平仄平仄仄</P>
<P>若按今音，平仄为：</P>
<P><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=淡" target="_blank" >淡</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=泊" target="_blank" >泊</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=之" target="_blank" >之</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=心" target="_blank" >心</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=" target="_blank" > </A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=不" target="_blank" >不</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=滞" target="_blank" >滞</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=于" target="_blank" >于</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=山" target="_blank" >山</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=水" target="_blank" >水</A>
仄平平平 平仄平仄平仄仄</P>
<P>好像都出律啊，大惑不解，还望学堂的老师解惑。谢谢了！</P>

梅苑仙踪

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>小手冰冰凉</I>在2005-9-22 0:31:00的发言：</B>

<P>第十二场会试的第一题出句是：</P>
<P><FONT color=#0000ff><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=淡" target="_blank" >淡</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=泊" target="_blank" >泊</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=之" target="_blank" >之</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=心" target="_blank" >心</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=" target="_blank" > </A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=不" target="_blank" >不</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=滞" target="_blank" >滞</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=于" target="_blank" >于</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=山" target="_blank" >山</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=水" target="_blank" >水</A></FONT><FONT color=#000000> </FONT></P>
<P>若按古音，平仄为：</P>
<P><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=淡" target="_blank" >淡</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=泊" target="_blank" >泊</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=之" target="_blank" >之</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=心" target="_blank" >心</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=" target="_blank" > </A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=不" target="_blank" >不</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=滞" target="_blank" >滞</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=于" target="_blank" >于</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=山" target="_blank" >山</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=水" target="_blank" >水</A>
仄仄平平 平仄平仄平仄仄</P>
<P>若按今音，平仄为：</P>
<P><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=淡" target="_blank" >淡</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=泊" target="_blank" >泊</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=之" target="_blank" >之</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=心" target="_blank" >心</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=" target="_blank" > </A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=不" target="_blank" >不</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=滞" target="_blank" >滞</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=于" target="_blank" >于</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=山" target="_blank" >山</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=水" target="_blank" >水</A>
仄平平平 平仄平仄平仄仄</P>
<P>好像都出律啊，大惑不解，还望学堂的老师解惑。谢谢了！</P></DIV>

呵呵，应不算出律。此联应按古音应对。前三字“不滞于”是领字，因此“<a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=不" target="_blank" >不</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=滞" target="_blank" >滞</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=于" target="_blank" >于</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=山" target="_blank" >山</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" >一</A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=水" target="_blank" >水</A>”不能按普通的七言联看待。

小手冰冰凉

可后四字“一山一水”也出律啊。。。。。。。。

                               
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小手冰冰凉

<P>唯一的解释是按意节划分：</P><P><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=淡" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>淡</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=泊" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>泊</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=之" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>之</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=心" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>心</FONT></A><FONT color=#000000> </FONT>\<a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=不" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>不</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=滞" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>滞</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=于" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>于</FONT></A>\<a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>一</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=山" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>山</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>一</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=水" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>水</FONT></A></P><P>但感觉比较牵强啊。
</P>

争锋

废园老师已予以说明，可去试部解疑：））

大蒙

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>小手冰冰凉</I>在2005-9-22 12:24:00的发言：</B>

<P>唯一的解释是按意节划分：</P>
<P><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=淡" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>淡</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=泊" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>泊</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=之" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>之</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=心" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>心</FONT></A><FONT color=#000000> </FONT>\<a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=不" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>不</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=滞" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>滞</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=于" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>于</FONT></A>\<a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>一</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=山" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>山</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=一" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>一</FONT></A><a href="http://www1.hotqq.com/cgi-bin/mz/poetry/yun.asp?s=水" target="_blank" ><FONT color=#000000>水</FONT></A></P>
<P>但感觉比较牵强啊。
</P></DIV>
<P>个人意见：
<P>这句可以放宽，理由：1、本句很好，思想性很强，有警勉作用，是说理联句。2、不滞于，作为领字，可以宽。3、一是数字，又是重复用字，产生了铿锵有力的节奏感。具有很好的艺术效果，可以宽。联句的格律要求，也得看情况。不能不要律。也不能为律至上。</P>

小手冰冰凉

谢谢争锋和大蒙校长。

梅云飞雪

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>大蒙</I>在2005-9-22 17:48:00的发言：</B>


<P>个人意见：

<P>这句可以放宽，理由：1、本句很好，思想性很强，有警勉作用，是说理联句。2、不滞于，作为领字，可以宽。3、一是数字，又是重复用字，产生了铿锵有力的节奏感。具有很好的艺术效果，可以宽。联句的格律要求，也得看情况。不能不要律。也不能为律至上。</P></DIV>
<P>受教了。</P>