<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>鸳鸯道人</I>在2007-1-5 20:07:09的发言:</B>
<P><FONT size=3>出句:书藏今古趣<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>寒天<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=3>对句:墨写浅深情 [<B>鸳鸯道人</B><FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman"><FONT size=3><FONT color=#cc3352>苏三: "<FONT face=Arial>蘸墨写情诉不尽", 情景交融. 平仄也工整. 很好的对句.</FONT></FONT></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P><FONT size=3>出句:数点梅花阶上落<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>寒天<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=3>对句:几行绝句袖中来 [<B>鸳鸯道人</B><FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" color=#cc3370 size=3>苏三: 几行绝句从袖中来, 很别致哦, 只是为什么呢?费解中.....</FONT></P>
<P>我是这样理解的,看梅时,手闲<FONT face="Times New Roman">袖中;灵感后,笔落绝句。笔,手执也,手,方从袖中来。不好意思,绕了个圈,俺改改[em04]</FONT></P><FONT face="Times New Roman">
<P><FONT size=3>出句:数点梅花阶上落<FONT face="Times New Roman"> [</FONT>寒天<FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></FONT></P>
<P><FONT face="Times New Roman" size=3>对句:几行绝句笔端来 [<B>鸳鸯道人</B><FONT face="Times New Roman">]</FONT></FONT></P></FONT>
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