[注意]七班第四讲 作业

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<P align=left mso-pagination: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: mso-margin-top-alt: left; TEXT-ALIGN: break-all; WORD-BREAK: 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt; widow-orphan; tab-stops: 140.25pt?>出句2：寒梅傲骨雪<B normal?>支持</B>   

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<P align=left mso-pagination: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: mso-margin-top-alt: left; TEXT-ALIGN: break-all; WORD-BREAK: 0pt; 0cm LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt; widow-orphan; tab-stops: 140.25pt?>出句3：心怀<B normal?>旧梦</B>思乡远

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