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<P align=left>3</FONT><FONT face="MS Song">、重配(</FONT><FONT face="Times New Roman">25</FONT><FONT face="MS Song">分)</P>
<P align=left>对句:晚年微服濡花院</FONT><FONT face="MS Song">= </FONT><FONT face="MS Song">仄平平仄平平仄</P>
<P align=left>重配:春日凝妆上翠楼</FONT><FONT face="MS Song">= </FONT><FONT face="MS Song">平仄平平仄仄平</P></FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>
<P align=left>阳光:律大乱了。</FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>12</FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>分</P></FONT><FONT face="Times New Roman">
<P align=left>4</FONT><FONT face="MS Song">、自撰联(</FONT><FONT face="Times New Roman">30</FONT><FONT face="MS Song">分)</P>
<P>怒发冲冠,却非逐利争名故</FONT><FONT face="MS Song"> = </FONT><FONT face="MS Song">仄仄平平,仄平仄仄平平仄</P>
<P align=left>捐躯殒首,正是精忠报国由</FONT><FONT face="Times New Roman"> = </FONT><FONT face="MS Song">平平仄仄,仄仄平平仄仄平</P></FONT><FONT face="Times New Roman">
<P>---- </FONT><FONT face="MS Song">岳飞</P></FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>
<P>阳光:律也见乱,表达一般。</FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>16</FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>分</P>
<P>总分:</FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>62</FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>分,过,还是到学堂里学习</FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>4</FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>个月好点,呵呵</FONT><FONT face="MS Song" color=#ff0000>~~~</P></FONT><FONT face="MS Song">
<P>晚辈想请问阳光版主,以上</FONT>3<FONT face="MS Song">、</FONT>4 <FONT face="MS Song">题二、四、六平仄分明,律乱在何处呢?</P></FONT></FONT>
[此贴子已经被作者于2005-4-16 17:11:17编辑过] |