梦琴台

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<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>绮梦抚琴</I>在2008-10-25 3:05:53的发言：</B>

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<DIV break-word? WORD-WRAP: 24px; TEXT-INDENT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: hidden; OVERFLOW: 12pt;><FONT size=4>出句：秋声落寞是心语[北]</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV break-word? WORD-WRAP: 24px; TEXT-INDENT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: hidden; OVERFLOW: 12pt;><FONT size=4>对句：菊酒清香为月魂</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV break-word? WORD-WRAP: 24px; TEXT-INDENT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: hidden; OVERFLOW: 12pt;><FONT color=#ee3d11 size=4>秋声比作心语，借秋之落寞，言心之落寞。</FONT></DIV>
<DIV break-word? WORD-WRAP: 24px; TEXT-INDENT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: hidden; OVERFLOW: 12pt;><FONT color=#ee3d11 size=4>而菊酒拟作月魂，其中没有逻辑可言。</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV break-word? WORD-WRAP: 24px; TEXT-INDENT: break-all; WORD-BREAK: hidden; OVERFLOW: 12pt;><FONT size=4>出句：春老已然悲白发[北]</FONT></DIV>
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<DIV><FONT size=4>对句：梦遥何以醉红颜</FONT></DIV>
<DIV><FONT color=#ff3300 size=4>出句叹时之流逝，已然二字，已为下句营造了一种氛围，对句梦遥，转而由上联对时之感叹到下联情之感叹。思路不错，可惜后面的红颜指向不明，出句已是白发，此红颜是己还是他人？</FONT></DIV></DIV></FONT></DIV>
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可儿

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>绮梦抚琴</I>在2008-10-27 4:30:30的发言：</B>

<P><FONT size=4>出句：推窗怀抱月</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>对句：拂袖指拈梅</FONT></P>
<P><FONT color=#ee1111 size=4>这句不错</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>出句：打马踏春去</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>对句：临风舞柳来</FONT></P>
<P><FONT color=#f76809 size=4>这个出对句的主语不一致了</FONT></P></DIV>

可儿

<DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>绮梦抚琴</I>在2008-10-28 1:38:57的发言：</B>

<P><FONT size=4>出句：青山笑看风云过</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>对句：碧水闲谈岁月飞</FONT></P>
<P><FONT color=#ee3d11 size=4>这句也不错。皆以淡然的姿态，看待世事之变迁和时光之流逝。</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>出句：笛与溪声流一处</FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4>对句：花同月色会三山</FONT></P>
<P><FONT color=#f73809 size=4>此一处为虚指。三山过实了。</FONT></P></DIV>