楼主: 邹宗德
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湖南邵阳晚报“巧联句”栏目(230) |
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“长河”拟人,“寻欢”双关。“长河起舞”颇具想像力,画面感十足。“浪寻欢”用俏皮的语言形象的描绘出了奔腾的长河之水。七个字合在一起以后感染力强,让人仿佛身临其境。好句~
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骈句两行寻乐趣
小诗半首弄风情 |
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“换气”主要是指屏气后再呼吸,亦指停歇一下。用在这里似乎也不太恰当。
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