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[出句] 莺声带雨垂檐密(碎月) |
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发表于 2018-11-21 12:57
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对句工稳,就是感觉夸度有点大哈,谢谢赐墨,碎月上茶^_^
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发表于 2018-11-21 14:02
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上下贴切,檐雨垂帘,微风吹来,有丝丝凉意扑面面来,好看^_^
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