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词流畅,意深远,见功力!
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笑口常开润靥容 风姿一展舞苍穹 雪山梅岭随之动 莲绽朝晖相映红 |
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文有侠肝需斗胆,诗无媚骨敢扪心。
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楚风轩http://china-liandu.com.cn/forum.php?mod=forumdisplay&fid=173
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