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[出句] 出句:不必求奇,文炼自然皆得意 [曾榜眼] |
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自是癫狂诗酒客
依然淡泊水云心 |
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对句更洒脱
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通神大好!
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红英落草非为寇;
玉手抽刀只卖萌。 |
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如何是好的确好!
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红英落草非为寇;
玉手抽刀只卖萌。 |
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