<P><FONT size=4><B>41.【雨香香】</B></FONT></P>
<P><FONT size=4><B>春<FONT color=#ff0033>雨</FONT>涤尘风细细
书斋练笔墨<FONT color=#ff0033>香香
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<P><FONT size=4><B><FONT color=#1a1ae6>谢谢老师,好句收藏!本人时间有限,偶尔抽时间上来看看,所以在对联上一直没有什么进展,在老师的作业本随手挑了几个试对了一下,请指教为谢!</FONT></B></FONT></P><FONT size=4><FONT color=#1a1ae6>
<P break-all; 12pt; WORD-BREAK: TEXT-ALIGN: justify? LINE-HEIGHT: inter-ideograph;><FONT face=宋体>出句:春色总遗绿【001】</FONT></P>
<P break-all; 12pt; WORD-BREAK: TEXT-ALIGN: justify? LINE-HEIGHT: inter-ideograph;><FONT face=宋体>對句:娇花常吐香[雨香]</FONT></P>
<P break-all; 12pt; WORD-BREAK: TEXT-ALIGN: justify? LINE-HEIGHT: inter-ideograph;><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ff0033>勾点:对句律合、对工,意境谐——无可挑剔!!
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</FONT><FONT face=宋体>出句:山深人寂寞[书僮]</FONT></P>
<P break-all; 12pt; WORD-BREAK: TEXT-ALIGN: justify? LINE-HEIGHT: inter-ideograph;><FONT face=宋体>对句:夜静月悠闲 [雨香]
<FONT color=#ff0033>勾点:还是工稳的对句,声律、对仗、意境、文采俱佳——非常喜欢!!</FONT>
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<P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>出句:松前云袖手 [转</FONT><FONT face=宋体>]
对句:月下柳吟诗[雨香]
<FONT color=#ff0033>勾点:依然滴水不漏,无可挑剔!!
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<P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt?><FONT face=宋体 color=#113dee>出句:阔野边山远【001】</FONT><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#113dee>
对句:晓春碧水蓝【雨香】</FONT> </FONT></P>
<P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt?><FONT face=宋体 color=#ff0033>勾点:对得好——欣赏!!</FONT></P>
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<P break-all; 12pt; WORD-BREAK: TEXT-ALIGN: justify? LINE-HEIGHT: inter-ideograph;><FONT face=宋体>出句:水阔鱼才旺【001】</FONT><FONT face=宋体>
对句:人勤业更兴 [雨香]</FONT></P>
<P break-all; 12pt; WORD-BREAK: TEXT-ALIGN: justify? LINE-HEIGHT: inter-ideograph;><FONT face=宋体 color=#ff0033>勾点:不错!!</FONT></P>
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<P break-all; 12pt; WORD-BREAK: TEXT-ALIGN: justify? LINE-HEIGHT: inter-ideograph;><FONT face=宋体>出句:雨濺梨花诗含泪【随缘】</FONT>
<P break-all; 12pt; WORD-BREAK: TEXT-ALIGN: justify? LINE-HEIGHT: inter-ideograph;><FONT face=宋体>对句:风掀画卷水动情【雨香】</FONT></P>
<P break-all; 12pt; WORD-BREAK: TEXT-ALIGN: justify? LINE-HEIGHT: inter-ideograph;><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ff0033>勾点:诗情画意的对句,与出句一气呵成!!只是动(仄),出律。可能是受了出句影响吧?(出句中,含平,失律)
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</FONT><FONT face=宋体>出句:好书不厌千回读[月上镰勾]</FONT></P>
<P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>对句:佳品应当百世传[雨香]</FONT></P>
<P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ff0033>勾点:好!!
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</FONT><FONT face=宋体>出句:信是云深藏妙境 [独醉琉璃界</FONT><FONT face=宋体>]
对句:从来壁峭有奇观 [</FONT><FONT face=宋体>雨香]
<FONT color=#ff0033>勾点:工而雅,上下行云流水、一气呵成!!</FONT></P>
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<P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>出句:明月依然如此夜[对月]</FONT>
<P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt?><FONT face=宋体>对句:桃花仍旧似从前 [雨香] </FONT></P>
<P break-all; LINE-HEIGHT: 12pt?><FONT face=宋体><FONT color=#ff0033>勾点:不错!
</FONT></FONT><FONT face=宋体>出句:一道残阳收雁影 [手指控</FONT><FONT face=宋体>]
对句:几杯浊酒慰平生 [雨香]</FONT></P>
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<P></FONT><FONT color=#ff0033>勾点:好句!!<FONT color=#f709f7><b>雨香香</b></FONT>妹妹,你的对联技艺,的确非同小可——激赏中</FONT></FONT>[em17][em17][em17][em23][em23][em23][em29][em29][em29]</P>
[此贴子已经被月上镰勾于2008-2-26 1:48:00编辑过]
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